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The given illustration presents the amounts used on restaurant foods and on home cooking cuisine in four various years and gives data on the number of meals eaten in two various diners. As seen in the pie chart, it was initially in 1970, 90% of total food budget was spent on home-made cuisine while only 10% was spent on restaurant foods. The amount spent on diner snacks increased to 15% in 1980 while it reached to 35% in 1990. In the year 2000, an average family spent half of the total budget in restaurant meals and that shows a rapid increase in the people’s habit of eating in outside diners. In the line graph, we can see that in 1970, the quick diners and sit-down restaurant meals were taken 20 thousand times each and over time these numbers kept increasing. Within the year 2000, more than 90 thousand fast food meals were eaten while the sit-down restaurant meals were eaten 50 thousand times a year. This indicates the changes in people’s habit of eating out and the popularity of restaurant foods over the home-made foods. In conclusion, over the 30 years’ time, people adopted the habit of eating out at restaurant and sit-down restaurant gained more popularity over the fast food shops.
The
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illustration presents the amounts
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used
on
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restaurant
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foods
and on home cooking cuisine in four various years and gives data on the number of
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meals
eaten in two various diners.

As
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seen
in the pie chart, it was
initially
in 1970, 90% of total
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food
budget was
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spent
on home-made cuisine while
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only
10% was
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spent
on
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restaurant
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foods
. The amount
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spent
on diner snacks increased to 15% in 1980 while it reached to 35% in 1990. In the
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year
2000, an average family
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spent
half of the total budget in
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restaurant
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meals
and that
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shows
a rapid increase in the
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people
’s habit of eating in outside diners.

In the line graph, we can
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see
that in 1970, the quick diners and sit-down
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restaurant
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meals
were taken
20 thousand
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times
each and
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over
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time
these numbers
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kept
increasing. Within the
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year
2000, more than 90 thousand
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fast
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food
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meals
were eaten
while the sit-down
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restaurant
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meals
were eaten
50 thousand
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times
a
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year
. This indicates the
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changes
in
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people
’s habit of eating out and the popularity of
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restaurant
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foods
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over
the home-made foods.

In conclusion
,
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over
the 30 years’
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time
,
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people
adopted the habit of eating out at
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restaurant
and sit-down
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restaurant
gained more popularity
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over
the
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fast
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food
shops.
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IELTS academic Fast food restaurant fast foods

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6.5
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