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learning English language should be made compulsory from primary school.

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First of all, my opinion English language should be made compulsory in primary school. because of better future for children so i agree this statement. English language must be essential for children in primary school. now modern era parents should be aware because of regarding their children. children habits are very stubborn. on now coming days English language is global language for my perspective, English language involve in their curriculum for better future. Secondly nowadays English language importance may be increasing on now coming decades. it would be essential for us. for instance learning English it's not a hard work it's smart work. as far as English language is concerned because the whole thing depends on children. some parents reward them but it's not good for children. however, meanwhile children also should do hard work for their better future. as well in the primary school teacher also rewarded children. importance of English give us lots of opportunities in nowadays. it also makes communication between people easier and helps to use the technological advantages of the modern world.
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nowadays English
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IELTS academic learning English language should be made compulsory from primary school.

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