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This report derives from one bar chart and a table that illustrates export earnings of one country in five different products, petroleum products, engineered products, gems and jewelry, agricultural products, and textiles, between 2015 and 2016. Overall, what stands out from the graphs is that whereas the textiles have the highest increase value, the lowest rise was seen in agricultural products. Moreover, the income of Gems and Jewelry is the only thing which decreased. Focusing on petroleum products and engineered goods, which were the highest two rates, these had nearly the same amount in 2015, with almost 60 and 55 million dollars, respectively. Their value reached roughly 62 million in 2016 as petroleum products increased with the 3% increase and the engineered goods rose %8, 5. As for agricultural products and textiles, the former increased slightly, with 0, 85%, while the latter rose more considerably, with 15, 24%, and the earnings of these products grew to approximately 32 million. Besides, the value of gems and jewelry decreased by nearly 2 million (%5, 18) and about reduced to 40 million after a year.

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