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The average of energy that used household and greenhouse gas emission the effect of energy used

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The pie charts represent the average of energy that used household and greenhouse gas emissions which cause by the energy used in Australia. Heating and other appliances are use energy about 42% and 15% but emission of greenhouse gas are 15% and 28%. Household spent 30% of energy on water heating which is the second largest and it results about 32% of greenhouse gas and it slightly increase 2%. Cooling is the smallest amount of used power only 2% and it can results 3% of gas emissions. For lighting Australian household used energy 4% and it caused the greenhouse gas 8% which is double of that the energy they used. Energy used in refrigeration also rise the double of its energy used from 7% to 14% in greenhouse gas emission. Heating can result 15% although it used 42% of energy while other appliances cause 28% of greenhouse gas which is nearly double of the energy used about 15%.
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are 15% and 28%.

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IELTS academic The average of energy that used household and greenhouse gas emission the effect of energy used

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