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Explain the difference in both maps

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The maps demonstrate a comparison between the changes which will be occurred in the center of a small town called Islip in the future. Overall, it is immediately apparent that new infrastructures will be constructed and the residential area will be expanded in the northeast of the city. While the shops are located In the both sides of the main road, the north side will be vanished in the future and the bus station, shopping center and car park will be built in the previous location of shops in the north of the city center. In addition, the main road will be destroyed and only pedestrians will utilize it. Furthermore, the residential area will be developed in the northeast and the southeast of the city. Although the big park is located in the southeast of the city, in the future, it will be minimized in its previous location. Moreover, the school will remain at the same place but the area will be expanded. All places will be surrounded by a dual carriageway which will be established in the future.
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Overall
, it is immediately apparent that new infrastructures will
be constructed
and the residential area will
be expanded
in the northeast of the city.

While the shops
are located
In the both sides of the main road, the north side will
be vanished
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
and the bus station, shopping center and car park will
be built
in the previous location of shops in the north of the city center.
In addition
, the main road will be
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destroyed
and
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only
pedestrians will utilize it.

Furthermore
, the residential area will
be developed
in the northeast and the southeast of the city. Although the
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big
park
is located
in the southeast of the city, in the
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future
, it will
be minimized
in its previous location.
Moreover
, the school will remain at the same place
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but
the area will
be expanded
. All places will
be surrounded
by a dual carriageway which will
be established
in the
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IELTS academic Explain the difference in both maps

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