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The given pie charts compare information about agricultural production between two areas in the country.

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The given pie charts compare information about agricultural production between two areas in the country. Overall, according to the charts in the eastern region concentrated on meat and products from milk. But in the western region prefer to produce grains than other types of food. In the east of country the major segment is taking by meat accounted for 35 percent. In the second place, producing dairy products with just under one-third of production. Also, in the west of country, the percentage of meat equal to percentage in the east side. But the dairy half as much as in the easter part of the country. In term of production of grains and vegetables, in the western region considerably more grain is produced, with forty-five percent of total production. Also, in this area a very small part is for vegetables producing, with only five percent. Meat is one of the top two most popular products besides grain, with thirty-five percent of production, the same as in Eastern area.
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pie charts compare information about agricultural
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production
between two areas in the country.

Overall
, according to the charts in the eastern region concentrated on
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meat
and products from milk.
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But
in the western region prefer to produce
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grains
than other types of food.

In the east of country the major segment is taking by
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meat
accounted for 35
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. In the second place, producing dairy products with
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under one-third of
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.
Also
, in the west of country, the percentage of
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meat
equal to percentage in the east side.
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the dairy half as much as in the easter part of the country.

In term of
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of
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grains
and vegetables, in the western region
considerably
more
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grain
is produced
, with forty-five
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of total
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, in this area a
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part is for vegetables producing, with
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five
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grain
, with thirty-five
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of
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, the same as in Eastern area.
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