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The chart illustrates the process by which a new sheep embryo is cloned.

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The chart illustrates the process by which a new sheep embryo is cloned. In general, it can be clearly visualized that this process completes in 2 phases including total 6 stages beginning from the extraction of body cell and egg cell from 2 different sheep (sheep A and sheep B) then fusion of those samples and culminating with the cloning of new lamb. To begin with, some of the body parts are received from sheep A and sheep B. After that, DNA is withdrawn from the first sheep. In a similar way, the nucleus is taken from the next sheep. After getting up of those pieces in hand both are mixed which allowed for artificial reproduction and let them grow into an embryo. Coming up to the next phase, surprisingly an embryo develops. Then, a grown embryo is safely introduced into the womb of sheep C in order to produce a new lamb. Eventually, surrogate mother sheep will give birth to healthy lamb after successful completion of gestation period

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let
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Coming up to the next
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 an embryo develops. Then, a grown embryo is safely
 introduced into the womb of sheep C in order to produce a new lamb. Eventually
, surrogate mother sheep will give birth to healthy lamb after successful completion of gestation period