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The bar chart depicts the expenditures between British and French on consumer goods in 2010. Moreover, the bar chart shows the expenditures of two countries which is cars, computer, books, perfume, cameras. Overall, British bar charts is more than France bar charts on cars, books, and cameras while computers and perfume of France is higher than France. By the ways, cars and computers between two countries is quite equal. Additionally, the least chart of British and France is perfume. Firstly, British is becoming the highest chart on cars, books, and cameras. Cars of British chart is more than France for 50, 000 pounds sterling furthermore books and cameras on British is higher than France for 100, 000 pounds sterling and 200, 000 pounds sterling. Secondly, computers and books are the most level of France however computers between France and British is quite equal but France chart is more than British for around 50, 000 pounds sterling. Finally, the least chart for both British and France is perfume. Nevertheless, British perfume chart is lower than France for approximately 600, 000 pounds sterling.
The bar
chart
depicts the expenditures between British and French on consumer
goods
in 2010.
Moreover
, the bar
chart
shows
the expenditures of two countries which is
cars
, computer,
books
,
perfume
, cameras.

Overall
, British bar
charts
is more than France bar
charts
on
cars
,
books
, and cameras while computers and
perfume
of France is higher than France. By the ways,
cars
and computers between two countries is quite equal.
Additionally
, the least
chart
of British and France is perfume.

Firstly
, British is becoming the highest
chart
on
cars
,
books
, and cameras.
Cars
of British
chart
is more than France for 50, 000 pounds
sterling
furthermore
books
and cameras on British is higher than France for 100, 000 pounds
sterling
and 200, 000 pounds sterling.

Secondly
, computers and
books
are the most level of France
however
computers between France and British is quite equal
but
France
chart
is more than British for around 50, 000 pounds
sterling
.
Finally
, the least
chart
for both British and France is
perfume
.
Nevertheless
, British
perfume
chart
is lower than France for approximately 600, 000 pounds
sterling
.
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