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Village of chorleywood Task1

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The illustration delineates how the development of Chorleywood village in London took place from 1868 to 1994, over a period of 125 years. Generally speaking, development works in this rural area proceeded much rapidly during 1970 to 1994 than that or previous decades. As the graph suggests, improvement in Chorleywood village was limited during the 19th century when area surrounded the Chorleywood station witnessed some development works. The railways were introduced in 1909 and it went across the station area and formed the ground for a wider development and constructions between 1922 and 1970, end of which the motorway was established in this village. The village went through rapid developments between 1970 and 1994 and had a wider roadway at this time. It is worth noticing that development and constructions in Chorleywood were guided by the transportation facilities as the junction areas witnessed a faster and large-scale progress than other areas. The park and the Golf course are in the middle of the village and train, road and motorways formed a hash (#) like road system in Chorleywood.
The illustration delineates how the
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development
of
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Chorleywood
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village
in London took place from 1868 to 1994, over a period of 125 years.
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speaking,
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development
works in this rural
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area
proceeded much
rapidly
during 1970 to 1994 than that or previous decades.

As the graph suggests, improvement in
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Chorleywood
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village
was limited
during the 19th century when
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area
surrounded the
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Chorleywood
station witnessed
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some
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development
works. The railways
were introduced
in 1909 and it went across the station
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area
and formed the ground for a wider
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development
and constructions between 1922 and 1970,
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end
of which the motorway
was established
in this
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village
. The
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village
went through rapid
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developments
between 1970 and 1994 and had a wider roadway at this time. It is worth noticing that
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development
and constructions in
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Chorleywood
were guided
by the transportation facilities as the junction
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areas
witnessed a faster and large-scale progress than other
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areas
. The park and the Golf course are in the middle of the
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village
and train, road and motorways formed a hash (#) like road system in
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Chorleywood
.
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IELTS academic Village of chorleywood Task1

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
178 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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