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Describe your ideal bedroom

Describe your ideal bedroom E72aB
My ideal bedroom is not large, but it is comfortable and well-organized. On the right, there is a large white bed. The room is always lit by natural light because there is a large window next to it. Next to the window is a medium-sized wooden cabinet. On top of it, there's a lamp, photos of me with my family and friends, and a small potted plant. There are some of the paintings on the wall. A laptop and my books are on a white desk next to the cabinet. Between the bed and the wardrobe, opposite the window, there is a round white table and two wooden chairs where I can sit and relax. To the left of the room is a wardrobe. I like the white room with the wooden furniture. Because it is simple, uncomplicated, and makes me feel at ease and cozy. I believe I will spend a lot of time in my room, doing work and looking out the window at the sky.
My ideal bedroom is not large,
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but
it is comfortable and well-organized. On the right, there is a large
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white
bed. The
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room
is always lit by natural light
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because
there is a large window
next
to it.
Next
to the window is a medium-sized wooden cabinet. On top of it, there's a lamp, photos of me with my family and friends, and a
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small
potted plant. There are
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some of the
paintings on the wall. A laptop and my books are on a
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white
desk
next
to the cabinet. Between the bed and the wardrobe, opposite the window, there is a round
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white
table and two wooden chairs where I can sit and relax. To the
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left
of the
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room
is a wardrobe. I like the
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white
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room
with the wooden furniture.
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Because
it is simple, uncomplicated, and
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makes
me feel at
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ease
and cozy. I believe I will spend
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a lot of
time in my
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room
, doing work and looking out the window at the sky.
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IELTS academic Describe your ideal bedroom

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  American English
1 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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