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The table show the information about the posts held by women in parliament management in five different countries.

The table show the information about the posts held by women in parliament management in five different countries. AJKRe
The given table illustrates the percentage of girls who took part in management and government election in five particular nations. Overall, it can be seen that the highest number of seats were found in Canada in government sector, while in management Rome had the higher number. In detail, there were only 2% difference between in Canada and Egypt in the seats of government. In contrast, Italy had only 40% seats and 23% women seats were found in Ukraine. However, Rome had the lowest number of seats which were only 10%Moving further, in management seats Rome was the main nation in which girls had the highest number of seats which were about 52% while Canada and Egypt women had the similar number of seats about 36% and 40% Ukraine seats were found in 2005 and the italian women only had 25% seats
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and 23% women
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which were about 52% while Canada and Egypt women had the similar
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IELTS academic The table show the information about the posts held by women in parliament management in five different countries.

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