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everyone has a favourite activity in his or her free time. What is your favourite one? Say something about it and the reason why you choose it

everyone has a favourite activity in his or her free time. What is your favourite one? Say something about it and the reason why you choose it K3Vbw
Everyone has an activity that they would do in their leisure time and so do I. Listening to music has been my favorite activity since I went to high school. I have a diverse type of music like US-UK pop, K-pop, V-pop, and even rap. Taylor Swift, Blackpink, or Ariana Grade are the singers that I love the most, their music is just too awsome that I can not get enough of it. For me, it is the best way to relax and get overstressed because listening to music gives me wonderful feeling. If I have to doing a work that requires concentrate, listen to music without lyrics have me focus better on doing it. Furthemore, listen to foreign music help me improve my listening skill and pronunciation on that launguage especially when I try to rap. In addiction, through melody I can connect and make friend with other people who is into music. I enjoy listen to music, it makes my life better.
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do I. Listening to
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has been my favorite activity since I went to high school. I have a diverse type of
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music
like US-UK pop, K-pop, V-pop, and even rap. Taylor Swift,
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Blackpink
, or Ariana Grade are the singers that I
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love
the most, their
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too
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of it. For me, it is the best way to relax and
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listening to
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gives me wonderful feeling. If I
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doing a work that requires concentrate, listen to
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music
without lyrics have me focus better on doing it.
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me
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my listening
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and pronunciation on that
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friend with other
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into
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. I enjoy listen to
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, it
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my life better.
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IELTS academic everyone has a favourite activity in his or her free time. What is your favourite one? Say something about it and the reason why you choose it

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5.5
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