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The table illustrate the information of four different school visited by pupils between 2000 to 2009. In detail, voluntery-controlled school had a highest ratio of 52% one time more than that of grammer school in 2002. On the other hand, specialist school and community school both of them had a similar percentage. In 2005, grammer education system had a ratio of 19% half of the voluntery-controlled. In fact, community school had a proportion of pupil attending was 32%. In spite of specialists schools had ratio of 11%. In the last list of table. it is evident the community school had a fantastic rate of percentage in 2009. Only 20% student of volunteers were arrived and 12% of grammar schools. The specialist school had slightly less than grammer school 10%
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and community
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both of them had a similar percentage. In 2005,
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education system had a ratio of 19% half of the
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