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ercentage of average spending by households in the country and compare between 2000 and 1920

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the pie charts illustrate the percentage of average spending by households in the country and compare between 2000 and 1920. It is immediately obvious that there was a wild spending percentage which related to food in 1920 and it had great percentage that involved recreation and other items in 2000. According to the pie charts there was the most percentage 71. 9 was about food in1920, while the most percentage a quarter of pie chart included recreation and other items in 2000. Then the spending for house hold goods 3. 2% and fuel and lights 6. 6% in 1920 were wildly more than spending percentages in 2000. At all the other items as medical care by 3. 5%, travelling and communications 14. 3%, education 6%, housing 6. 3%, and clothing 4. 5% in2000 was considerably more than in1920. In conclusion the spending by households during years had changed and its clearly obvious.

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spending
 by households in the country and compare between 2000 and 1920.

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spending
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percentage
 which related to food in 1920 and it had great You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 that involved recreation and other items in 2000.

According to the pie charts there was the most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 71. 9 was about food in1920, while the most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 a quarter of pie chart included recreation and other items in 2000. Then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
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house
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goods
 3. 2% and fuel and lights 6. 6% in 1920 were wildly
 more than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentages
 in 2000. At all the other items as medical care by 3. 5%, travelling and communications 14. 3%, education 6%, housing 6. 3%, and clothing 4. 5% in2000 was considerably
 more than in1920.

In conclusion
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 by households during years had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
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clearly
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