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The chart line show the percentage of population from 1950 to 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature

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The chart illustrates the population growth of New Zealand from 1950 to 2050. Overall, there was a plummet in 3 age groups, with the group of over 65 age witnessing the dramatic drop, while the range of age from 38 to 45 went up in 1990 onwards. In addition, despite the falling down, the people from 38 to 45 years old also reached the highest figure throughout the period. The percentage of 38 to 45 years old New Zealanders started with the large number at 60% in 1950, after which it experienced moderate increase to reach a peak in 1990, before ending the period at 55%. Although it dropped out for 60 years, it still has a significant percentage in New Zealand. Similarly, the figure for New Zealand’s age from 38 to 45 was 25% at the beginning, followed by the significant level up to approximately 50% in 1990, reducing to 40% in 2000 and maintained onwards. 5% of people from 0 to 14 years old in New Zealand was seen in 1950, with maintenance in 40 years after, and finally went up considerably in 2050 at 20%. This made it came to the 3rd rank of age groups in this country. Contrarily, a twice decrease which is 10% reduction, was demonstrated in the age from 28 to 37 in those years which is from 1950 to 1990 and 2000 to 2050. The former went down from 20% to 10%, while it was from 10% to 0% for the other.
The chart illustrates the population growth of
New
Zealand from 1950 to 2050.

Overall
, there was a plummet in 3
age
groups, with the group of over 65
age
witnessing the dramatic drop, while the range of
age
from 38 to 45 went up in 1990 onwards.
In addition
, despite the falling down, the
people
from 38 to 45 years
old
also
reached the highest figure throughout the period.

The percentage of 38 to 45 years
old
New
Zealanders
started
with the large number at 60% in 1950, after which it experienced moderate increase to reach a peak in 1990,
before
ending the period at 55%. Although it dropped out for 60 years, it
still
has a significant percentage in
New
Zealand.
Similarly
, the figure for
New
Zealand’s
age
from 38 to 45 was 25% at the beginning, followed by the significant level up to approximately 50% in 1990, reducing to 40% in 2000 and maintained onwards.

5% of
people
from 0 to 14 years
old
in
New
Zealand was
seen
in 1950, with maintenance in 40 years after, and
finally
went up
considerably
in 2050 at 20%. This made it came to the 3rd rank of
age
groups in this country.
Contrarily
, a
twice decrease
which is 10% reduction,
was demonstrated
in the
age
from 28 to 37 in those years which is from 1950 to 1990 and 2000 to 2050. The former went down from 20% to 10%, while it was from 10% to 0% for the other.
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IELTS academic The chart line show the percentage of population from 1950 to 2050.

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4 paragraphs
250 words
6.5
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