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The pie chart gives information about the total school spending in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The pie chart gives information about the total school spending in 1981, 1991 and 2001. jDnb1
The pie chart gives information about the total school spending in five categories (insurance, teachers salary, furniture and equipment, resources and other workers' salary) in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Overall, it is clear that almost half of the total portion in all the given years is spent on the salary of the teachers. The lowest spending is seen in providing insurances. In 1981, 39% was spent on Teachers' salary. It also rose by 11% in the next decade which is accountable for half of the total portion. The figures slightly declined in 2001, accounts for 45%. The next highest spendings in the three given years goes to the salary of other workers, responsible for about 15-29% in general. The highest spending on resources is in the year 1991, numbers are 20% which is doubled compared to 2001. The total spending of schools are seen to be less on insurances. Only 2% in 1981, 3% in 1991 and a slightly higher number in 2001.
The pie chart gives information about the
total
school
spending
in five categories (insurance, teachers
salary
, furniture and equipment, resources and other workers'
salary)
in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

Overall
, it is
clear
that almost half of the
total
portion in all the
given
years
is spent
on the
salary
of the teachers. The lowest
spending
is
seen
in providing insurances.

In 1981, 39%
was spent
on Teachers'
salary
. It
also
rose by 11% in the
next
decade which is accountable for half of the
total
portion. The figures
slightly
declined in 2001, accounts for 45%. The
next
highest
spendings
in the three
given
years goes to the
salary
of other workers, responsible for about 15-29%
in general
.

The
highest
spending
on resources is in the year 1991, numbers are 20% which
is doubled
compared to 2001.
The
total
spending
of schools are
seen
to be less on insurances.
Only
2% in 1981, 3% in 1991 and a
slightly
higher number in 2001.
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