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Energy usage and the greenhouse gas which is released from its energy used

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The charts below illustrate the percentage of main five energy used by Australian household and the greenhouse gas production which is released from the energy usage of household. Overall, most energy is used in heating by household nevertheless its gas emission is lower percentage of its used but energy used in refrigeration is released the greenhouse gas doubled of its energy applied. Heating is the most popular form of energy used among Australian household 42% by percentage which is nearly half of the all energy usage but it produced only 15% of greenhouse gas, by following this energy used in lighting is only 4% and it released 8% of gas while other appliances used only 15% by housewife and it released which is closely doubled of its used 28%. Energy used in cooling is the least in both charts it used only 2% and its emission is slightly increase 1% while refrigeration produced 14% of greenhouse gas and that is doubled of its applied 7%.
The charts below illustrate the percentage of main five
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IELTS academic Energy usage and the greenhouse gas which is released from its energy used

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