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Ehe chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation

Ehe chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation PLO1X

The given chart illustrate the rate of household in two ways, over the course of of 100 years in two country. It is clear from the graphics, the percentage was changed strikingly in constant. According to what is shown, the households in owned accommodation in 1918 was around 23% whereas in households in rented was over 75%, as a consequence the percentage is significantly different, Moreover in 1939, 1953 and 1961 the owned was just around 40%, in constant the rent was higher than owned by 75%, 69% and 59%. On the other hand, from 1981 to 2011, the percentage changed dramatically the rented accommodation decreased in comparison with the owned accommodation. Therefore, in 1981 the owned was 60 % whereas the rented was 40 % and in 1991 the owned was around 68% and on the hand was just over 30%. In conculation, we could say that the percentage changed significantly during 100 years. One of the most prominent features of this data is in 1971 the ratio was similar by just 50% in rented and owned accommodation.

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