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Describe a part of the day

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This is an Interesting topic and I thank you letting me talk about my favourite part of the day. Well, I am an early riser and early in the morning is my favourite time for a day. I usually woke up 5: 00 am and started my day with fresh a glass off water. I brush my teeth and fresh my self and go the gym. The gym about an 1 hour then a little walk to the riverside besides take my breakfast with lots of protein. I do read newspaper in 7 am in my balcony with a cup of tea. At 8. 00 am take hot shower and Finally I dressed up at 8: 30 join my job at 9 O’clock. The early morning is totally different from other parts of the day. It is quiet, refreshing and allows me to planning for all the day. This the best time for exercise and for a lite and healthy meal. Most of the doctors suggests us for early morning curriculum. Early morning not only good for physical health but also best for metal health. All of people in a density country inhale pollution air while early morning provide us a fresh air which god gifted. Even when I was in school I had to join in morning shift classes. After all I made a habit for me to feel the morning. Now a days I even can not think about my day out without early morning.
This is an Interesting topic and I thank you letting me talk about my
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favourite
part of the day. Well, I am an
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early
riser and
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early
in the
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morning
is my
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favourite
time for a day.

I
usually
woke up 5: 00 am and
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started
my day with fresh a glass off water. I brush my teeth and fresh my self and go the gym. The gym about an
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1 hour
then a
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little
walk to the riverside
besides
take my breakfast with lots of protein. I do read newspaper in 7 am in my balcony with a cup of tea. At 8. 00 am take hot shower and
Finally
I dressed up at 8: 30
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join
my job at 9 O’clock.

The
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early
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morning
is
totally
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different
from other parts of the day. It is quiet, refreshing and
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allows
me to
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planning
for all the day. This the best time for exercise and for a lite and healthy meal. Most of the doctors suggests us for
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early
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morning
curriculum.

Early
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morning
not
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only
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good
for physical health
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but
also
best for metal health. All of
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people
in a density country inhale pollution air while
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early
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morning
provide us a fresh air which god gifted.
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Even when
I was in school I had to
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join
in
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morning
shift classes.
After all
I made a habit for me to feel the
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morning
.
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Now a days
I even can not
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think
about my day out without
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early
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morning
.

IELTS academic Describe a part of the day

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
247 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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