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Drinking and buying habits of beverage such as tea and coffee in five different urban area in Australia for last four weeks has been illustrated in the bar chart.

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Drinking and buying habits of beverage such as tea and coffee in five different urban area in Australia for last four weeks has been illustrated in the bar chart. At a first glance, citizen of Australia mostly prefers to enjoy their coffee and tea in the cafe most except for the people of Adelaide where instant coffee is slightly more popular. Fresh coffee is least enjoyable to people of Australia. In terms of drinking, people of Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart drinks coffee and tea at cafe most at over 60%. In contrast, fresh tea and coffee is their least favorite drink as nearly 40% of people drinks fresh coffee and the last 28 days. For fresh coffee Barisbane and Adelaide's population choose to drink least amount as nearly one-third people of these cities drink fresh coffee. Instant coffee is second most popular drink in the Australian mentioned cities except for Adelade where it is mostly used for beverage as half of their all people drink instant coffee.
Drinking and buying habits of beverage such as
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in five
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urban area in Australia for last four weeks has
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in the bar chart.

At a
first
glance, citizen of Australia
mostly
prefers to enjoy their
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coffee
and
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tea
in the
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cafe
most
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except for
the
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people
of Adelaide where instant
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coffee
is
slightly
more popular.
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Fresh
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coffee
is least enjoyable to
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people
of Australia.

In terms of drinking,
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people
of Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart
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drinks
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coffee
and
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tea
at
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cafe
most at over 60%.
In contrast
,
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fresh
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and
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is their least favorite
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drink
as
nearly
40% of
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people
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drinks
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fresh
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and the last 28 days. For
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Barisbane
and Adelaide's population choose to
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people
of these cities
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drink
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fresh
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is second most popular
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in the Australian mentioned cities
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Adelade
where it is
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used
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people
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IELTS academic Drinking and buying habits of beverage such as tea and coffee in five different urban area in Australia for last four weeks has been illustrated in the bar chart.

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167 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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