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Do you think online classes are effective? provide both sides arguments to support your opinion?

Do you think online classes are effective? provide both sides arguments to support your opinion? Lr9O3
There always exists a relationship between education and socialization to advance the cognitive development of an individual. Nowadays, education has become technology-driven and easily accessible. According to me, the efficacy of online learning can go either way, effective as well as ineffective. The online method of education can be a highly effective alternative method of education for the students who are matured, self-disciplined and motivated, well organized and having high degree of time management skills, but it is an inappropriate learning environment for more dependent learners and has difficulty assuming responsibilities required by the online courses. That’s why the effectiveness of online education depends upon various factors and parameters. On one hand, online learning could be proved as efficient in terms of time management especially for working professionals who cannot afford to attend a classroom course due to their jobs and hectic schedule. They can learn through online classes according to their convenience. When attending online classes, the student is able to schedule the classes as per his/her own time-table. There are no chances of crash programs or missed classes due to unavailability of the lecturer. Online classes also give students the opportunity to submit their assignments and sit for exams at their own convenience. On the other hand, online classes lack the access of the students to teachers and an opportunity to discuss ideas with fellow students. Various researches have proved that students learn more when they have personal access to a teacher since it allows them to ask doubts without hesitation. Also, when a number of students sit in a class, this creates an atmosphere of cooperation in which students discuss ideas and find solutions to problems. This is not possible in an online course. For instance, while online MBA courses are popular these days, most companies prefer full-time classroom MBAs as they have a superior group discussion, critical analysis, and communication skills. These skills are a product of fruitful discussions in a classroom. In a nutshell, online classes have many features as well as many downsides. The features include, students can learn whatever they want, it is more comfortable and the pacing of learning is managed by the pupil. As far as downsides are concerned it involves lack of interaction and immature behaviour of the student. So, it mainly depends upon the commitment and the capability of the learner either he is capable enough to tackle the challenges associated with e-learning. But as technology develops, many of these problems will be resolved and e-learning will become inevitable in the near future.
There always exists a relationship between
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education
and socialization to advance the cognitive development of an individual. Nowadays,
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education
has become technology-driven and
easily
accessible.
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According to me
, the efficacy of
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online
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learning
can go either way, effective
as well
as ineffective. The
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online
method of
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education
can be a
highly
effective alternative method of
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education
for the
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students
who
are matured
, self-disciplined and motivated, well organized and having high degree of time management
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skills
,
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but
it is an inappropriate
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learning
environment for more dependent learners and has difficulty assuming responsibilities required by the
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online
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courses
. That’s why the effectiveness of
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online
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education
depends upon various factors and parameters.

On one hand,
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online
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learning
could
be proved
as efficient in terms of time management
especially
for working professionals who cannot afford to attend a classroom
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course
due to their jobs and hectic schedule. They can learn through
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online
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classes
according to their convenience. When attending
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online
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classes
, the
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student
is able to schedule the
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classes
as per his/her
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own
time-table. There are no chances of crash programs or missed
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classes
due to unavailability of the lecturer.
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Online
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classes
also
give
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students
the opportunity to submit their assignments and sit for exams at their
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own
convenience.

On the other hand
,
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online
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classes
lack the access of the
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students
to teachers and an opportunity to discuss
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ideas
with fellow
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students
. Various researches have proved that
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students
learn more when they have personal access to a teacher since it
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allows
them to ask doubts without hesitation.
Also
, when a number of
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students
sit in a
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class
, this creates an atmosphere of cooperation in which
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students
discuss
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ideas
and find solutions to problems. This is not possible in an
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online
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course
.
For instance
, while
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online
MBA
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courses
are popular these days, most
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companies
prefer full-time classroom
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MBAs
as they have a superior group discussion, critical analysis, and communication
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skills
. These
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skills
are a product of fruitful discussions in a classroom.

In a nutshell,
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online
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classes
have
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many
features
as well
as
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many
downsides. The features include,
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students
can learn whatever they want, it is more comfortable and the pacing of
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learning
is managed
by the pupil. As far as downsides
are concerned
it involves lack of interaction and immature
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behaviour
of the
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student
.
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So
, it
mainly
depends upon the commitment and the capability of the learner either he is capable
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enough
to tackle the challenges associated with e-learning.
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But
as technology develops,
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many
of these problems will
be resolved
and e-learning will become inevitable in the near future.
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IELTS academic Do you think online classes are effective? provide both sides arguments to support your opinion?

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