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The bar chart below illustrates the use of tobacco products by secondary school students in the United State.

The bar chart below illustrates the use of tobacco products by secondary school students in the United State. YLdOQ
The bar graph indicates the use of tobacco products by moddle and high school students in the US. The scale is in percentage. To begin with, the highest percentage of student use tabacco for any use, which is 35% in high school and around 12% in middle school. 28 per cent of high school student also enjoy cigarette but approximately 9 per cent of middle school student use it. Kreteks tobacco product is less preferable amonge middle and high school students. Fewer middle school students use this about 2% and roughly 5%high school students. In middle and high school about 15% and 7% students costume cigars. Other tabacco product such as pipes and bidis have lower level of popularity, it less than 5% secondary school students use it. Overall, the bar chart shows decreasing pattern. In secondary school high rate of student use tabacco for any use and low percentage of students use tabacco for pipes.
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in the US. The scale is in percentage.

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with, the highest percentage of
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for any
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, which is 35% in
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and around 12% in
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middle
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. 28 per cent of
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also
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approximately 9 per cent of
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middle
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tobacco product is less preferable
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students
. Fewer
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this about 2% and roughly
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5%high
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. In
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about 15% and 7%
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costume cigars. Other
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product such as pipes and
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have lower level of popularity, it less than 5% secondary
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Overall
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decreasing pattern. In secondary
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rate of
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and low percentage of
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tabacco
for pipes.
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