Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used an average English home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used an average English home. BJgXp
The required electricity in UK in a day in the Summer and the Winter season has illustrated by the line chart. Another circle graph describes in which fields mean people of England use electricity. It can be seen from the diagram, the supreme quantity uses in the Winter rather than the Summer. Although the trends gradually boost up to at night, at the end of the night it becomes least (In the Winter nearly 30, 000 units and in the Summer nearly 10, 000 units). People consume maximum current at night time in between 21 to 24 hours. On the contrary, in the Summer it goes to extreme in the middle of 12 and 15 hours. Besides, nevertheless, the curve of the cold time significantly rises, the line is gradually shrinking before 3 hours of morning. Furthermore, implementation of current occur from 18 to 21 hours. The second chart depicts to heating rooms and warming water are the vital reason (52. 5%). Since in the two different fields utilize the same amount ( 15% for the light, TV. radio and 15% for the vaccume cleaners, food mixers, electric tools), it is near to another field for the ovens, kettles, washing machines. They have only 17. 5% - 15% = 2. 5% variation. Most importantly, the first cause is more than the addition of remaining all of the circumstances. that is 17. 5% + 15% + 15% = 45. 5% only except the largest one. On the contraty, the highest one is 52. 5%. In conclusion, although in Britain use in colder periods more then double as much as in the hot periods, to make comfortable temperature and to boiling water is crucial purpose.
The required electricity in UK in a day in the
Summer
and
the Winter season
has illustrated by the line chart. Another circle graph
describes
in which fields mean
people
of England
use
electricity. It can be
seen
from the diagram, the supreme quantity
uses
in the Winter
rather
than the
Summer
. Although the trends
gradually
boost up to at night, at the
end
of the night it becomes least (In the Winter
nearly
30, 000 units and in the
Summer
nearly
10, 000 units).
People
consume maximum
current
at
night time
in
between 21 to 24
hours.
On the contrary
, in the
Summer
it goes to extreme in the middle of 12 and 15 hours.
Besides
,
nevertheless
, the curve of the
cold
time
significantly
rises, the line is
gradually
shrinking
before
3 hours of morning.
Furthermore
, implementation of
current
occur from 18 to 21 hours.

The second chart depicts to heating rooms and warming water are the vital reason (52. 5%). Since in the two
different
fields utilize the same amount
(
15% for the light, TV. radio and 15% for the
vaccume
cleaners, food mixers, electric tools), it is near to another field for the ovens, kettles, washing machines. They have
only
17. 5%
-
15% = 2. 5% variation. Most
importantly
, the
first
cause is more than the addition of remaining
all of the
circumstances.
that
is 17. 5% + 15% + 15% = 45. 5%
only
except the largest one. On the
contraty
, the highest one is 52. 5%.

In conclusion
, although in Britain
use
in colder periods more
then
double as much as in the hot periods, to
make
comfortable temperature and to boiling water is crucial purpose.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used an average English home.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
283 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: