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The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. 7aLX6
the bar chart ullustrate the data about the people's struggles when they go abroad. In general the most problem for people living abroad related to healthcare. The greatest problem for people who go to live in other contries is sorting out healthcare, especially for people in middle age. It shows the highest result just above 35%, thereas the young generatin is the least worrying about this problem. It is trend approximately 32 %. Related to finances it is also shows the highest percent in middle aged people 35%, the lowest trend refer to aged people just under 30%. the yougth stand in the middle rate between middle aged and elderly people with data 34%. Concerning find schools for their children people in middle age also take the first place with 18 percent. Regarding to aged people they are less interested in this question and they rate shows just 2, 5 percent.
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