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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 1017. Summarize th information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 1017. Summarize th information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent. pR1q9
This graph is showing th number of tourists vising a carrbean island from 2010 to 1017. Firstly, the total number of the vising memebers on that island were 1 million in 2010, 1. 3 million in 2011, 1. 5 millions in 1012, 2 millions in 2013, 2. 5 millions in 1014, 2. 7 millions in 2015, 2. 7 millions in 2016, and lastly, 3. 5 millions in 2017. The number increased from 2010 to 2017 with the identical number of visitors in 2015 and in 2016. Then, the visitor staying in that cruise ship were. 25 million in 2010, 0. 50 million in 2011, . 25 million in 2012, 0. 5 million in 2013, 1 million in 2014, 1. 40 million in 2015, 1. 5 million in 2016 and 2 millions in 2017. The number also increased in this eight years with the consistent amount in 2010 and in 2012. Next, the number of visitors who stayed on that island consecutively are, 0. 75 milion in 2010, 0. 75 million in 2011, 1. 25 millions in 2012, 1. 5 millions in 2013, 1. 5 millions in 2014, 1. 5 millions in 2015, 1. 25 millions in 2016 and 1. 5 millions in 2017. According to the graph, the number of tourists stayed on that island did not increase much in eight years, rather they had a similar number of visitors on that island from 2013 to 2017, except 2016. The number dicreased in 2016 and then rised again in 2017. Thank you for your time reading this.
This graph is showing
th
number
of tourists vising a
carrbean
island
from 2010 to 1017.

Firstly
, the total
number
of the vising
memebers
on that
island
were 1
million
in 2010, 1. 3
million
in 2011, 1. 5
millions
in 1012, 2
millions
in 2013, 2. 5
millions
in 1014, 2. 7
millions
in 2015, 2. 7
millions
in 2016, and
lastly
, 3. 5
millions
in 2017. The
number
increased from 2010 to 2017 with the identical
number
of
visitors
in 2015 and in 2016.

Then, the
visitor
staying in that cruise ship were. 25
million
in 2010, 0. 50
million
in 2011
, .
25
million
in 2012, 0. 5
million
in 2013, 1
million
in 2014, 1. 40
million
in 2015, 1. 5
million
in 2016 and 2
millions
in 2017. The
number
also
increased in this eight years with the consistent amount in 2010 and in 2012.

Next
, the
number
of
visitors
who stayed on that
island
consecutively
are, 0. 75
milion
in 2010, 0. 75
million
in 2011, 1. 25
millions
in 2012, 1. 5
millions
in 2013, 1. 5
millions
in 2014, 1. 5
millions
in 2015, 1. 25
millions
in 2016 and 1. 5
millions
in 2017. According to the graph, the
number
of tourists stayed on that
island
did not increase much in eight years,
rather
they had a similar
number
of
visitors
on that
island
from 2013 to 2017, except 2016. The
number
dicreased
in 2016 and then
rised
again in 2017.

Thank you for your time reading this.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 1017. Summarize th information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

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