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DO YOU THINK A ZOO IS NECESSARY

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I think zoos as important in the preservation of endangered species by protecting them from dangers such as habitat degradation and urbanization. Some zoos also undertake breeding programs to try to boost the populations of endangered species to save them from going extinct. Second, keeping animals in zoos helps people learn more about them, which may help raise public awareness about the need of preserving specific species.
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in the preservation of endangered species by protecting them from
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such as habitat degradation and urbanization.
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undertake breeding programs to try to boost the populations of endangered species to save them from going extinct. Second, keeping animals in zoos
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learn more about them, which may
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raise public awareness about the need of preserving specific species.
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