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The diagram describes the steps of plastic bottles re cycling

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The diagram describes the steps of plastic bottles recycling industray. Overall, there are main nine steps for plastic bottles recycling, starting from collecting and soarting them, and finishing by reproduce new products from the recycled plastic. As a first steps, people through the used plastic products (bottles) in defined garbage boxes, a special truck comes to collect the bottles and shifts them to the factury. In the factory as the third step, the labours start soarting the collected bottles into a useful or a damaged one, after that the good ones are compresed into a block. This block of compresed bottles goes through a production machine with two big turning wheels, which turns the block into small chips. The chips go after that to a container for washing them, then moved to another machin, where they treated to make them ready for the next step. The final step in producing the raw plastic is by heating the pelles and getting the raw plastic that is ready to use in other industries. Finally, this raw materilas are reused in production of different products like, pens, . . . .
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plastic
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bottles
recycling
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industray
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for
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plastic
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bottles
recycling, starting from collecting and
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soarting
them, and finishing by reproduce new products from the recycled
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plastic
. As a
first
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steps
,
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people
through the
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used
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plastic
products
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(bottles)
in defined garbage boxes, a special truck
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comes
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bottles
and shifts them to the
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factury
. In the factory as the third
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step
, the
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labours
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soarting
the collected
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bottles
into a useful or a damaged one, after that the
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good
ones are
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compresed
into a block. This block of
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bottles
goes through a production machine with two
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big
turning wheels, which turns the block into
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chips. The chips go after that to a container for washing them, then
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in producing the raw
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plastic
is by heating the
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pelles
and getting the raw
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use
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different
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