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Writing task 1, mobile market shares

Writing task 1, mobile market shares aQLNm

The table compares the percentage market share of various mobile manufacturers in the world wide mobile phone market in 2005 and 2006. Overall, it can be seen that Nokia had the highest sales in both the years. Although, the shares of Nokia, Motorola, Sony Ericsson have increased in 2006, the sales of the rest of the mobile types have plummeted. Firstly, Nokia has been on the top of the market in both 2005 and 2006 holding shares of 32. 5% and 35% respectively. Motorola increased its shares by almost 3. 5 % in one year and therefore, stood second in 2006. Sony Ericsson gained merely 1. 1% shares, contributing to 7. 4% of mobile market shares in 2006. On the other hand, other mobile brands recorded the highest fall of 3% in the share market with 16. 2% shares in 2006. Furthermore, BenQ Mobile's had the least shares in the market with figures of 4. 9% in 2005 and a mere 2. 4% in 2006.

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market
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share
 of various mobile manufacturers in the Did you mean "worldwide"?worldwide
world wide
 mobile phone You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
market
 in 2005 and 2006. Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that Nokia had the highest sales in both the years. Although, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionstakeproportionpartinterestdividend
shares
 of Nokia, Motorola, Sony Ericsson have increased in 2006, the sales of the rest of the mobile types have plummeted.

Firstly
, Nokia has been on the top of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
market
 in both 2005 and 2006 holding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionstakeproportionpartinterestdividend
shares
 of 32. 5% and 35% respectively
. Motorola increased its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionstakeproportionpartinterestdividend
shares
 by almost 3. 5 % in one year and therefore
, stood second in 2006. Sony Ericsson gained merely
 1. 1% You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionstakeproportionpartinterestdividend
shares
, contributing to 7. 4% of mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
market
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shares
 in 2006. On the other hand
, other mobile brands recorded the highest fall of 3% in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionstakeproportionpartinterestdividend
share
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market
 with 16. 2% You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionstakeproportionpartinterestdividend
shares
 in 2006. Furthermore
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BenQ
 Mobile's had the least You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionstakeproportionpartinterestdividend
shares
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
market
 with figures of 4. 9% in 2005 and a mere 2. 4% in 2006. 