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Diagram show the making of bricks

Diagram show the making of bricks PWMrg

This diagram illustrates us information to generate bricks for the building industry. Firstly, a numerous and huge machinery included digger, metal grid, etc. This procedure start from collecting clay with the help of digger. Secondly, drop down on the metal grid. It is filtrate there and goes on the roller. After this sand plus water, move toward the wire cutter and mould both of them produce the different shape of bricks. When this process completly done than material put into the drying oven for one to two days. In the last, bricks stays for three to four days in cooling chamber and ready for delivery.

This diagram illustrates us information to generate bricks for the building industry. Firstly
, a numerous and huge machinery included digger, metal grid, etc. This procedure This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 from collecting clay with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of digger. Secondly
, This phrase is redundant. Consider using "drop".drop
drop down
 on the metal grid. It is filtrate there and goes on the roller. After this sand plus water, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 toward the wire cutter and Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.mold
mould
 both of them produce the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 shape of bricks. When this process Possible spelling mistake found.completelycomplexly
completly
 done than material put into the drying oven for one to two days. In the last, bricks stays for three to four days in cooling chamber and ready for delivery. 