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The graph shows the number of trips made by children in the year 1990 and 2010

The graph shows the number of trips made by children in the year 1990 and 2010 mbLXA

The given bar graph represents the count of journeys that were made vy the children in a country by using the different mode of transport in the year 1990 as well as in 2010. Overall, the car was the most useful vehicle for the children in year 2010 whereas, the bus was become the biggest mode of transport in year 1990. In 1990, the bus was at the top level in order to made trips to and from school while, the car was the least. Walking and cycling were at the same rate of 6 million. Apart from this, bus and walking were made almost 7 million trips. By the year 2010, approximately 12 million journeys were made by the children by using car. The bus made half of trips as compared to the car. The lowest count of journey was made by cycling. The walking, bus and walking were at the count of 3 and 5 million respectively.

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