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The plans below show a student common room five years ago and the common room now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans below show a student common room five years ago and the common room now. rYKnl
The pictures below illustrate the changes that take place within a student common room over the period of 5 years. Overall, there are a strike change at the number and order of the student tables in the room. Moreover, many brand-new equipments are applied well for higher facilities within student experience. In the unchanged room size, 2 small tables are converted into huge square table which is useful to create more space for new bench for laptops that is installed in the bottom of the room. Beside that, new drinks machine is located next to the refrigerator. The old book shelf in the past is demolished to make a way for new entertainment set up with three arms chairs and television. Furthermore, there are many facilities still remained in the same place such as Cupboard, Sink and Refrigerator. In the past, a student common room has 2 Benches and 1 Microwaves; but, after 5 years there is only 1 Bench exist in the middle and 2 Microwaves are installed instead.
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at the number and order of the
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tables in the
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size, 2
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tables
are converted
into huge square table which is useful to create more space for new bench for laptops that
is installed
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room
. Beside that, new drinks machine
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next
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book shelf in the past
is demolished
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a way for new entertainment set up with three arms chairs and television.
Furthermore
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facilities
still
remained in the same place such as Cupboard, Sink and Refrigerator. In the past, a
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student
common
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has 2 Benches and 1 Microwaves;
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, after 5 years there is
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1 Bench exist in the middle and 2 Microwaves
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IELTS academic The plans below show a student common room five years ago and the common room now.

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