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The table below shows the number of tourists (in millions) visiting different areas of the world from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of tourists (in millions) visiting different areas of the world from 1990 to 2005. nNdV2
The diagram illustrates the number of tourists visiting different areas globally from 1990 to 2005. Overall, the total number of tourists worldwide keep growing in the 15 years. Among these figures, the tourists in Europe are constantly the most, while those in Middle East are always the least, but turns out to the most expansion one. The number of tourists in the Middle East in 2005 is approximately three times of that in 1990. To look in more details, almost every area was steadily increasing except Americas. The tourists in Americas rise in the previous 10 years, however, it drops in 2005 and is 2. 1 million less than that in 2000. Asia and the Pacific has an upward trend of 1. 5 times more in each gap, and Europe gradually accounts for one forth of the total number of the world and 4 times more of Americas and Asia, indicating that most of the people prefers Europe most. The numbers in Africa and Middle East become near after 2000, with just a 2 to 3 million gap. The figures in Africa rise dramatically in the first 10 years, about 5 to 6. 2 million, while it becomes moderate and only increases 2. 1 million in 2005. Americas increase 15 and 20 million tourists in the first 2 stages respectively whereas declines 13. 1 million people in 2005. What worth mention is that Asia and the Pacific have less tourists than Americas before 2000, but it finally exceeds that in 2005, with a 17 million range.
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areas globally from 1990 to 2005.

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growing in the 15 years. Among these figures, the
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in Europe are
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in Middle East
are always the least,
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turns out to the most expansion one. The
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in the Middle East in 2005 is approximately three times of that in 1990.

To look in more
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, almost every area was
steadily
increasing except Americas. The
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in Americas rise in the previous 10 years,
however
, it drops in 2005 and is 2. 1
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less than that in 2000. Asia and the Pacific
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an upward trend of 1. 5 times more in each gap, and Europe
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of the world and 4 times more of Americas and Asia, indicating that most of the
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people
prefers Europe most. The
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in Africa and Middle East become near after 2000, with
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a 2 to 3
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, while it becomes moderate and
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increases 2. 1
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in 2005. Americas increase 15 and 20
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in the
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whereas declines 13. 1
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in 2005. What worth mention is that Asia and the Pacific have
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than Americas
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