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the maps below show changes that took place in youngsville city from 1980 to 2005

the maps below show changes that took place in youngsville city from 1980 to 2005 pJXK2

This map illustrate the development which too place coastal town in youngsville in newzeland time period between 1980 to 2005. overall, all comparison between two maps that revels the changes in ruler area to urban area while the begin of the period city has under development but after the end of the period they have significant changes. To commence with, in the 1980 town was much greener residential area and residential area was much greenery and single story house. While, The end of the period most of the place are develop. the green residential area was cutting down and replace with new many skyscraper and the woodland changes into big factories and warehouse and also in 2005 North side the River Alanah cut down the tree. in 2005 Northside build the public park, stadium and hospital facility for the public. Railway station was develop and pass on the reaver aianah. The stadium was develope to near the lake and also build the parking facility. Beside the railway station in a northside build a marina point in the 2005.

The verb 'illustrate' is plural. Did you mean: "This map illustrates"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?This map illustrates
This map illustrate
 the development which Did you mean "to place"?to place
too place
 coastal town in Possible spelling mistake found.LouisvilleHuntsvilleTownsville
youngsville
 in Possible spelling mistake found.woodlandmoorlandnewsstandWoodlandNederlandNewsela
newzeland
 time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 1980 and 2005".between 1980 and 2005
between 1980 to 2005
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOverall
overall
, all comparison between two maps that revels the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in ruler You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 to urban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 while the The word 'begin' is not a noun. Did you mean "beginning"?beginning
begin
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
 city has under development This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
 they have significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
.

To commence with, in the 1980 town was much greener residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 was much greenery and single story This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
, The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
 most of the place are Consider using a past participle here: "developed".developed
develop
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 green residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 was cutting down and replace with new Possible agreement error. The noun skyscraper seems to be countable; consider using: "many skyscrapers".many skyscrapers
many skyscraper
 and the woodland This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 factories and warehouse and also
 in 2005 North side the River Possible spelling mistake found.AlanaAla nahAlan ahAlana h
Alanah
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down the tree.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 2005 Northside build the public park, stadium and hospital facility for the public. Railway station was Consider using a past participle here: "developed".developed
develop
 and pass on the Possible spelling mistake found.readerWeaverbeaverweaverreaperreamer
reaver
Possible spelling mistake found.DianaDinahAdanaJinnahAlanaAANAL
aianah
. The stadium was Possible spelling mistake found.developeddevelopdeveloperdevelopsdevelop edéveloppé
develope
 to near the lake and also
 build the parking facility. Beside the railway station in a Possible spelling mistake found.Northsidenorth side
northside
 build a marina point in the 2005. 