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The given bar graphs provide the information about percentage of boys and girls going to secondary school and taking higher education from 4 different parts of the world in 2000. In the Europe, 100% of boys were in secondary school and slight less than that 90% of girls were there but for higher education these numbers declined (75% for boys, 80% for girls). The same scenario was in south Africa but with quite lower numbers than Europe. 39% girls went to secondary school and the boy’s percentage reduced by 2% from girls and for higher education girl’s percentage was only 9% and boys was 12%. In Asia, 50% and 19% females had pursued secondary and higher education respectively and for males these numbers reduced by 10% & 8% respectively. 40% of females and 30% of males were in secondary education and as observing rapid loss only 11% girls and 9% boys choose higher education in Latin America. Overall, Girls were leading to have secondary and higher education in all given regions (except Europe and South Africa). Europe was only region where maximum number of students of both genders went for secondary school as well as in higher education.
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regions (except Europe and South Africa). Europe was
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