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destination of UK graduate and post graduate study (excluding non full time work) in year 2008

destination of UK graduate and post graduate study (excluding non full time work) in year 2008 P3bJ
The chart illustrates how the UK graduate and postgraduate do beside of full-time work in 2009. In Uk graduate group. The most popular destination is was further study which accounted for nearly 3000 students. Follow by part-time work and unemployment which was 17735 and 16235 Respectively. while voluntary work was the lowest destination in graduate student which accounted for only 35000 students. In UK post graduate group. Similar to graduate group that further study in the most famous destination. parrim
The chart illustrates how the UK
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and postgraduate do beside of full-time work in 2009.

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group. The most popular destination
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study which accounted for
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3000 students. Follow by part-time work and unemployment which was 17735 and 16235
Respectively
.
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student which accounted for
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35000 students. In UK post
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group. Similar to
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group that
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IELTS academic destination of UK graduate and post graduate study (excluding non full time work) in year 2008

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
79 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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