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Design and locations of the wave-energy machine

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The diagram below illustrates the design and location for a wave-enegy machine. There are some parts needed in the wave-energy machine in order to work properly and the locations of this machine is customized to the need. The turbine of the machine are located above the water level. There is an electricity generator that will help the turbine to rotate and produce air. Then, this air will pass through a chamber resulting the water level to rise and it become waves. In the terms of the location of the wave-energy machine, the machine is being placed in lower land will create large waves because there are more water absorbed by the machine. But, it needs a lot of money for the installation. Meanwhile, if the machine is being put at the higher land it may have low installation costs however the waves produce are really small or low output of waves.

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