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harvested domestically in houses for drinking purpose. Overall, what stands out from the diagram is that this process appears to be have 4 steps, collection, storage, chemical treatment and supply. In the beginning stage, rain water is

harvested domestically in houses for drinking purpose. Overall, what stands out from the diagram is that this process appears to be have 4 steps, collection, storage, chemical treatment and supply. In the beginning stage, rain water is e5wqB
This diagram illustrates the process by which rain water is harvested domestically in houses for drinking purpose. Overall, what stands out from the diagram is that this process appears to be 4 steps: collection, storage, chemical treatment and supply. In the beginning stage. In the beginning, rain water is collected by a tube and drained into a water filter. This filter purifies the collected water, before channelizing into a storage tank. Then, from this storage unit water flows into a water treatment chamber via a connecting tube. Whatever water reached there is undergone chemical treatment. Then, this chemically treated water is supplied back into houses, then can avail this purified water via taps, this can be used for drinking purpose.
This diagram illustrates the process by which rain
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is harvested
domestically
in
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houses
for drinking purpose.

Overall
, what stands out from the diagram is that this process appears to be 4 steps: collection, storage, chemical treatment and supply. In the beginning stage.

In the beginning, rain
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water
is collected
by a tube and drained into a
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water
filter. This filter purifies the collected
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water
,
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before
channelizing into a storage tank. Then, from this storage unit
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water
flows into a
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water
treatment chamber via a connecting tube. Whatever
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water
reached there is undergone chemical treatment. Then, this
chemically
treated
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water
is supplied
back into
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houses
, then can avail this purified
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water
via taps, this can be
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used
for drinking purpose.
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