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show the changes of the number of visitors in three main major airports in New York city from 1995 to 2000

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The bar chart illustrates the figure for tourists who used three main airports in Nre York city from 1995 to 2000. Overall, it is evident that people prefer using LaGuardia airport to the others In the first 3 years, from 1995 to 1997, John F. Kennedy airport is the most popular as we can see the upward tren from 26 million to 47 million passengers, which nearly doubled. There was also a rise in the number of travellers usign LaGuardia airport, but in 1997 it wasn; t as high as the number of travellers using John F. Kennedy, which stood at 44 milion in 1997. Newark aiport had the least tourist in 3 years; however. it was following the same trend as the other airports, increased from 16 million to approximately 4 million passengers in 1997 Between 1998 and 2000, the number travellers in LaGuardia airport kept going up and reached a peak at closely 70 millin people, while John F. Kennedy aiport witnessed a freamatic fall to almost 30 milion people by 1999, but it soon returned to 45 million people. Whereas the figure for passengers using Newark airport were unchanged in the perid od 3 years
The bar chart illustrates the figure for tourists who
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passengers in 1997

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