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There is information about water use worldwide adn water consumption in two different countries. Summerise the informations.

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The two chats gives information about the area of using water (1900 to 2000) and how much water used in Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo in 2000. Overall, there was a sharp increase of in using water in agriculture, industrial use. Even though Brazil has a large land and crowded population rather than Democratic Republic of Congo, their water consumption is less than other another country. Using water for industry and local use peaked after 1950 and dramatically went up in the next years. There was not a big increase for of domestical use. It also raised after 1950 and its probably because of population growth. According to table chart, Brazil had a big population, 176 million. Their irrigated land is 26. 500km2. Democratic Republic of Congo is a very small county. Its land area only 100km2. People in Congo spent more water for their needs even if their water consumption was given only 8m3 by the chart.

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 in Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo in 2000.

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. Even though
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 consumption is less than other another country.

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 population, 176 million. Their irrigated land is 26. 500km2. Democratic Republic of Congo is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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small
 county. Its land area This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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 100km2. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 in Congo spent more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 for their needs even if their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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 consumption was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
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 8m3 by the chart. 