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Describing map of an art center

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This map illustrates the expansion of Clowick Arts Center between 2005 and today. As you can see the most noticeable changes are in the usage of free space in order to have more green area, furthermore, in the size and the number of buildings. In 2005, there were two galleries in the east of the center, next to the concert hall. A snack bar, meeting room, and toilet are on the left side of the center. In addition, we can see a big wasteland with no usage. Nowadays, many trees are planted in the wasteland as well as one stage. Central exhibition area and drama studio are added to the centre. The gallery is relocated to the left of the center, one more meeting room is built, concert hall and cinema were attached to each other before, however, they are separated to two different buildings.
This map illustrates the expansion of
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Clowick
Arts Center between 2005 and
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today
.

As you can
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see
the most noticeable
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changes
are in the usage of free space in order to have more green area,
furthermore
, in the size and the number of buildings.

In 2005, there were two galleries in the east of the center,
next
to the concert hall. A snack bar, meeting room, and toilet are on the
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left
side of the center.
In addition
, we can
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see
a
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big
wasteland with no usage.

Nowadays,
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many
trees
are planted
in the wasteland
as well
as one stage. Central exhibition area and drama studio are
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added
to the
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centre
. The gallery
is relocated
to the
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left
of the center, one more meeting room
is built
, concert hall and cinema
were attached
to each other
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before
,
however
, they
are separated
to two
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different
buildings.
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IELTS academic Describing map of an art center

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
145 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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