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Describe the person that you loved or admire

Describe the person that you loved or admire QV6J1

In my family, father is the person I love the most. Now, my father is over forty years old. He is farmer. My father doesn’t have while and smooth skin, instead he has tanned skin. On his face, wrinkles start to appear. His hands are dry and rough. It was work and time that made my father’s skin look like this. My father is very hard working, he gets up very early. Because of work, sometimes my father forgets to take care of himself. But look him still very cool. He often plays sports in the afternoon, and he likes play table tennis the most. He is exemlary man: love wife love children. But he is very strict. He doesn’t express his feelings to someone. I never see he cry, but I known he is sad because of me many times. I want say sory to my father and I very love him.

In my family, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 is the person I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemotiontendernessappreciationtastefondnesslust
love
 the most. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 is over forty years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. He is farmer. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 doesn’t have while and smooth skin, instead
 he has tanned skin. On his face, wrinkles This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to appear. His hands are dry and rough. It was work and time that made my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father’s
 skin look like this. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.hard-workinghardworking
hard working
, he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 up This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 early. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of work, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 forgets to take care of himself. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 look him still
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 cool. He This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 plays sports in the afternoon, and he likes play table tennis the most. He is Possible spelling mistake found.exemplary
exemlary
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
: You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemotiontendernessappreciationtastefondnesslust
love
 wife You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemotiontendernessappreciationtastefondnesslust
love
 children. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 he is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 strict. He doesn’t express his feelings to someone. I never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 he cry, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I known he is sad This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 times. I want say Possible spelling mistake found.sorrystorysortSonyTorysore
sory
 to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 and I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemotiontendernessappreciationtastefondnesslust
love
 him. 