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Describe the map on past and present

Describe the map on past and present AJnQL
The maps illustrate how the island was developed in the present compared with past. Overall it is clear that the sea has surrounded in the paradise Island. It is changed considerly with introduction of tourism and lots of developments in the infrastructure facilities. During the past the east side of the island was a rock and natural spring is there. The middle of the island some trees are there. Also the west side of the island a scientific research station and pier and boat was in the sea. the north west part of the island there was a beach. As well as the present the island has totally changed with swimming pool, hotel complex, open resturant and bbq area in the central part of the island. A cycle path is covered with the whole island. The east side of the island has a cafe. then the north east side a scenic lookout. Although the west side a cruise ship was there. In the beach swimming is also permitted.
The maps illustrate how the
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island
was developed
in the present compared with past.

Overall
it is
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clear
that the sea has surrounded in the paradise
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Island
. It is
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changed
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considerly
with introduction of tourism and lots of developments in the infrastructure facilities.

During the past the east side of the
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island
was a rock and natural spring is there. The middle of the
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island
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some
trees are there.
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Also
the west side of the
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island
a scientific research station and pier and boat was in the sea.
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the
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north west
part of the
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island
there was a beach.

As well
as the present the
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island
has
totally
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changed
with swimming pool, hotel complex, open
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resturant
and
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bbq
area in the central part of the
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island
. A cycle path
is covered
with the whole
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island
. The east side of the
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island
has a
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cafe
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then
the
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north east
side a scenic lookout.
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Although
the west side a cruise ship was there. In the beach swimming is
also
permitted.
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