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Describe the chart below that is giving information on homeowners

Describe the chart below that is giving information on homeowners LbpJG

The bar chart below is giving information about the residential status of people that are aged 25-34 and live in the UK. According to the bars and keys, in 2004 about 60 percent of people between the age of 25-34 were homeowners but in 2014 this rate was reduced to about 35 percent. Based on the reduction of homeowners percentage, we can see that between 2004 to 2014 the number of renters has been increasing by almost 30 percent (from 20 percent to 50 percent). If we compare the increment and decrement of both keys, we realize that the rate of homeowners and renters has changed slightly during the ten years. And also 2007 was the only year that both bars have gone up. In conclusion, when comparing the bars, it is apparent that in ten years more people between 25-34 were supposed to rent and fewer people in that age group could afford to buy a house.

The bar chart below is giving information about the residential status of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 that are aged
 25-34 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the UK.

According to the bars and keys, in 2004 about 60 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 between the age of 25-34 were homeowners This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in 2014 this rate was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to about 35 percent.

Based on the reduction of homeowners percentage, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 2004 and 2014".between 2004 and 2014
between 2004 to 2014
 the number of renters has been increasing by almost 30 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 (from 20 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 to 50 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent)
. If we compare the increment and decrement of both keys, we realize that the rate of homeowners and renters has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
slightly
 during the ten years. And also
 2007 was the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 year that both bars have gone up.

In conclusion
, when comparing the bars, it is apparent that in ten years more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 between 25-34 were supposed
 to rent and fewer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in that age group could afford to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. 