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Describe the changes of an art gallery ground floor

Describe the changes of an art gallery ground floor G92GQ

The illustrations reveal the modifications of an art gallery ground floor since 2015 to the present day. Overall, this art area underwent relatively noticeable changes including the addition of a children’s area, a momentary exhibition as well as the existence of an automation food convenience and a lift. On the left-hand side, the former cafe has been demolished to make way for the installation of the gallery shop. Besides, an automation food-selling machine has been erected in the middle where was formerly occupied by the gallery office. In the bottom, exhibition room 4 has been removed and remodeled into two new amenities including a provisional exhibition and a children’s location. In the center of the maps, an elevator has been installed in the right adjacent to the stair having been marginally shortened while the receptionist has been moved closer to the entrance. In addition, a set of three exhibition rooms including spacious exhibition rooms named 1 and 2 and a smaller exhibition room 1 on the right-hand side have remained unchanged in size as well as position.

The illustrations reveal the modifications of an art gallery This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?first floor
ground floor
 since 2015 to the present day. Overall
, this art area underwent relatively
 noticeable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 including the addition of a children’s area, a momentary exhibition as well
 as the existence of an automation food convenience and a lift.

On the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
-hand side, the former 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 has been demolished
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for the installation of the gallery shop. Besides
, an automation food-selling machine has been erected
 in the middle where was formerly
 occupied by the gallery office. In the bottom, exhibition You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 4 has been removed
 and remodeled into two new amenities including a provisional exhibition and a children’s location.

In the center of the maps, an elevator has been installed
 in the right adjacent to the stair having been marginally
 shortened while the receptionist has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 closer to the entrance. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 addition, a set of three exhibition You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 including spacious exhibition You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 named 1 and 2 and a smaller exhibition You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 1 on the right-hand side have remained A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.unchanged
unchanged in size
as well
 as position. 