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Meat 4 different kind in 1979 to 2004

Meat 4 different kind in 1979 to 2004 2Ky36

The graph illustrates the information about the number of people who was eaten fish and 3 different kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004. From an overall perspective, what stand out from the graph is that there was considerable upward trend in the income of chicken, whereas the consume of beef and lamb saw a substantial fall. In contrast, 3 different kinds of meat are experienced significant changes but fish witnessed a slight decrease. Another interesting point is in the beginning beef was the most consumed but in the last chicken was the most popular. To begin with beef, the consumption started at 220 in 1979, then there was a fluctuation over until 1984 and then levelled off at 240. After that, the number declined dramatically between 1989 and 2004, finished at around 110 in 2004. Regarding the consumption of chicken, it started at the same figure as a lamb, both the figure was 150 in 1979. At this point, they went in an opposite direction. There was a significant increase in chicken, following this, it surpassed beef in 1989, and ended the period at 250, which was the highest figure. On the other hand, lamb was dropped considerably until 2004, and finished reaching nearly 50. With respect to fish, it began approximately 60. The consumption of fish witnessed a slight went down over the period, and ended at lower than 50.

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