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The charts give information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US

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The charts gave information about the number of honey-bee colonies and the amount of honey production in the United States between 1970 and 2010. The number of honey-bee colonies were showed at the left chart. In 1970, there were four millions honey-bee colonies and the next ten years, this increased approximately 4, 2 millions. However, in 1990, the number of one fell to 3, 5 millions colonies, and then this decreased every ten years. Finally, in 2010, the number of colonies reached just under 2 millions. During the same periods, the amount of honey production were 130. 000 tonnes in 1970 and dropped to 70. 000 tonnes in 2010. But between 1980 and 1990, the amount of production of honey were increased about 10. 000 tonnes (from 110. 000 tonnes went up to 120. 000 tonnes production). Overall, the both charts figures decreased for 40 years.
The charts gave information about the
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of honey-bee
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and the amount of honey production in the United States between 1970 and 2010.

The
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chart. In 1970, there were four millions honey-bee
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and the
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ten years, this increased approximately 4, 2 millions.
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of one fell to 3, 5 millions
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, and then this decreased every ten years.
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under 2 millions.

During the same periods, the amount of honey production were 130. 000 tonnes in 1970 and dropped to 70. 000 tonnes in 2010.
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, the both charts figures decreased for 40 years.
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