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electricity production with hydroelectric power station

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the diagram provided the process of electricity production through a hydroelectric power station overall diagram displays that the station works both at night and in the daytime, the process begins are with the water flows from the river into a high-level Reservoir and end with the transmission of the power line to the National generator. it can be seen that in the first step water is collected in a high-level reservoir. water collects in front of Dam and passes through an intake which is open during the day. in the second Step, water flows along the slope from Dam to the power station to generate electricity. Then in the generator, the water passes through the reversible turbines, and power is harnessed to the national grid through the power lines. The reversible turbines which generator water send water to the low-level reservoir during the day. Then in the night-time, water kept in low-level Reservoir convert into the power station and turbine of the generator pumped it back into the high-level reserve which is closed during the night. in conclusion, electricity is generated from the water flowing in the river during the daytime, which is pumped back from the low-level reservoir in to high-level Reservoir at night.
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diagram provided the process of electricity production
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a hydroelectric
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power
station

overall
diagram displays that the station works both at night and in the daytime, the process
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begins
are with the
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water
flows from the river into a
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high-level
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Reservoir
and
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end
with the transmission of the
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power
line to the National generator.

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it
can be
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seen
that in the
first
step
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water
is collected
in a
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high-level
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reservoir
.
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water
collects in front of Dam and passes
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through
an intake which is open during the day.
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in
the second Step,
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water
flows along the slope from Dam to the
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power
station to generate electricity. Then in the generator, the
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water
passes
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through
the reversible turbines, and
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power
is harnessed
to the national grid
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through
the
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power
lines. The reversible turbines which generator
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water
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send
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water
to the low-level
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reservoir
during the day.

Then in the night-time,
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water
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kept
in low-level
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Reservoir
convert into the
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power
station and turbine of the generator pumped it back into the
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high-level
reserve which
is closed
during the night.

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conclusion, electricity
is generated
from the
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water
flowing in the river during the daytime, which
is pumped
back from the low-level
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reservoir
in to
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high-level
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Reservoir
at night.
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IELTS academic electricity production with hydroelectric power station

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4 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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