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The maps show the ring road in 2007 and 2010.

The maps show the ring road in 2007 and 2010. j9w1N
The ostensible map charts detail the information about the alterations in the structure of road in 2010 which suggessted a way to a city hospital in 2007. In 2007, city hospital was located inside the rindg road area and that was still exists over there in 2010. Whereas, from the south direction of 2007 map, it can be witnessed that cityv road was going to right - side but hospital road was accessible to upper in north and it had entirely six bus stops alongsides of that path. In east, a joined car park was also situated for staff and public. Turning to the information of 2010 map, it can be seen that with city hospital in east direction an additional building of public car park had been constructed. In contrast, two roundabouts were also buikd in top and bottom side of hospital road beacause these were suggest two paths to the bus station which was build by replacing the 3 bus stops in the left side of the road and remaining 3 were also cleared to make a way for staff car park. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that visibke three variations were experienced by that given area regarding two roundabouts for bus station and separation of public and staff car parks.
The ostensible map charts detail the information about the alterations in the structure of
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road
in 2010 which
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suggessted
a way to a city
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hospital
in 2007.

In 2007, city
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hospital
was located
inside the
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rindg
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road
area and that was
still
exists over there in 2010. Whereas, from the south direction of 2007 map, it can
be witnessed
that
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cityv
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road
was going to right
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-
side
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but
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hospital
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road
was accessible to upper in north and it had
entirely
six
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bus
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stops
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alongsides
of that path. In east, a
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joined
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car
park was
also
situated for staff and public.

Turning to the information of 2010 map, it can be
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seen
that with city
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hospital
in east direction an additional building of public
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car
park had
been constructed
.
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, two roundabouts were
also
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buikd
in top and bottom side of
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hospital
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road
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beacause
these
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were
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suggest
two paths to the bus station which was build by replacing the 3 bus
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stops
in the
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left
side of the
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road
and remaining 3 were
also
cleared to
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make
a way for staff
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car
park.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that
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visibke
three variations
were experienced
by that
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given
area regarding two roundabouts for bus station and separation of public and staff
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car
parks.
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IELTS academic The maps show the ring road in 2007 and 2010.

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