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Describe a time when you waited something special happend

Describe a time when you waited something special happend M33A9
Today I am gonna talk about the time I waited for the college admission announcement. It has been couple of years since I got that annoucement. Because that result was really important to me and it marked the hook in my life, so in the days near the results I was really anxious and kep my checking my email continously to make sure I didn't miss any email. I also tried to spend my time listening to music or watching movies to stop myself from worrying and overthinking. To tell you the truth, It was really a anxious experience for me which I have never forgotten. Finally, after 2 months waiting for the result, I got an email which confirmed that I am as a student of the school. I was full of joys of spring and called my parents to let them know.
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I am gonna talk about the time I waited for the college admission announcement. It has been
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couple of
years since I
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got
that
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annoucement
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Because
that result was
really
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important
to me and it marked the hook in my life,
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so
in the days near the results I was
really
anxious and
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kep
my checking my email
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continously
to
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make
sure I didn't miss any email. I
also
tried to spend my time listening to music or watching movies to
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stop
myself from worrying and overthinking. To
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tell
you the truth, It was
really
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a
anxious experience for me which I have never forgotten.
Finally
, after 2 months waiting for the result, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
an email which confirmed that I am as a student of the school. I was full of joys of spring and called my parents to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
them know.
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IELTS academic Describe a time when you waited something special happend

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  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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