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The diagram illustrates the process how to construct an igloo from snow.

The diagram illustrates the process how to construct an igloo from snow. 3Wg55
The diagram illustrates the process how to construct an igloo from snow. There are various stages, beginning with finding the area covered by hard-packed snow and ending with covering the entrance hole with snow blocks. In the first stage of the process, after the area covered by hard-packed snow is found, a snow saw is used to cut hard-packed snow into large blocks to build the base. When the base is complete, the next blocks have their edges smoothed by the builder to be placed on top one another, until a dome-like structure is shaped. Then, a hole is dug under the igloo’s wall in order to make an entrance, while on top of the dome, a significantly large block of snow is used to cover the final opening. Thus, an igloo is shaped Then, softer snow is shoveled on top of the igloo to provide additional coverage, and the builder ensures that this snow is securely packed into all crevices between the stones. Following that, the wall inside the igloo is smoothed by hand, and any extra snow is shoved out the igloo. Finally, a hole is dug in the shape of the entrance, and then is covered with more snow blocks to create an igloo
The diagram illustrates the process how to construct an igloo from snow.

There are various stages, beginning with finding the area covered by
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hard
-packed
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snow
and ending with covering the entrance hole with
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snow
blocks.

In the
first
stage of the process, after the area covered by
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snow
is found
, a
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snow
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saw
is
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used
to
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cut
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hard
-packed
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snow
into large
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blocks
to build the base. When the base is complete, the
next
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blocks
have their edges smoothed by the builder to
be placed
on top one another, until a dome-like structure
is shaped
. Then, a hole
is dug
under the igloo’s wall in order to
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make
an entrance, while on top of the dome, a
significantly
large
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block
of
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snow
is
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used
to cover the final opening.
Thus
, an igloo
is shaped


Then, softer
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snow
is shoveled
on top of the igloo to provide additional coverage, and the builder ensures that this
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snow
is
securely
packed into all crevices between the stones. Following that, the wall inside the igloo
is smoothed
by hand, and any extra
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snow
is shoved
out the igloo.

Finally
, a hole
is dug
in the shape of the entrance, and then
is covered
with more
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snow
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blocks
to create an igloo
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process how to construct an igloo from snow.

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